Chintee
Senior Poet
Hero of Arizona
Posts: 44
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Post by Chintee on Sept 25, 2010 5:07:43 GMT
I was asked the other day,
"Do you remember fifth grade?"
To which I did say,
"Yes, but most memories did fade."
But, then, to my dismay
I was reminded of the teacher
(of whom I did "grade")
And by that I mean: no preacher
Would approve of such an aid
She did give to a growing young mister.
My point to be "a.k.a.'d":
The teacher was a looker! |
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Post by Edna Sweetlove on Sept 25, 2010 9:53:58 GMT
The teacher was a looker? Had me worried. Are you sure you meant an "L" and not an "H"? You should be so lucky.
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Post by Mr W*nker Watson on Sept 29, 2010 18:52:34 GMT
Very good! Its nice to have a looker for a teacher - most of mine were FAT DOGS!
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Post by Romeo Gupta Singh on Sept 30, 2010 10:50:51 GMT
I have a friend called Conrad who is very much of a "poetry buffin" and I think he will enjoy this if you don't mind me reading it to him? You may also tell me what you think of my poems about my fat wife even though they are only short and not to this very good standard.
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Post by Douglas Ramsbottom on Oct 7, 2010 17:21:37 GMT
I've got my leg over a couple teachers. Best lesson they ever had. Good poem, mate!
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Post by lardydar on Oct 22, 2010 12:49:07 GMT
Yes, me likey. Economical yet spunky.
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Post by montez on Jan 30, 2011 7:09:38 GMT
Disagree with the others, I think this is badly written ; "DOs" and "DIDs" are anathema to me.
I believe they're a lazy cop-out, and that there's always a grammatical way around the problem.
The rhyme scheme and flow are also "all to cock"!
Regards,
R. Sole.
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Post by Edna Sweetlove on Jan 30, 2011 17:19:45 GMT
I have to agree with montez r. sole about the "dids" and "dos" - just words inserted to fit in with some alleged attempt at metre.
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