Cinders
Nice Poet
Dreamy Writer
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Post by Cinders on Sept 24, 2010 10:40:42 GMT
Serenity, winter seas,
deep blue, with a hint of bitterness,
cold and dark,
yet I smile for you,
in this winter sun.
As each wave collides with the shore,
crashes into my mind,
my heart pounds,
as she draws away, I sigh,
she carries away my guilt and pain.
What is left,
lying wrecked on the pebbles,
with renewed strength and courage,
I think of you once more,
and again I smile.
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Post by Edward R. Lamington on Sept 24, 2010 10:53:49 GMT
The elements of sadness which you mentioned rang out more strongly for me here than the uplifting side, it was more bittersweet - but in such a beautifully painted way that I couldn't help but enjoy it. Also because I am used to living by the sea [grew up by it and my sister drowned it it sadly] and thus associate it with home, with life, with happiness and tragedy too... this was exquisitly done!
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